2009年5月26日 星期二

Karen's Weight-loss Tips

There is a girl,Karen,she thinks she is too heavy. So she would like to lose weights. She has to eats less and more exercise. She goes to jog at six o'clock every morning. She also keeps away the junk food,eat more fruit and vegetables. She wants to lose weights because she would like to be more charming,slender,and energetic. She wants to be more healthy,too. She has kept exercising and eating healthy for two months. She is slender,energetic,and charming now. She is very happy that she decided to lose weights.

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  1. Hello,
    1. There is a girl,Karen,she thinks she is too heavy. So she would like to lose weights.
    → Karen thinks she is too fat so she would like to lose weight.
    2. She has to eats less and more exercise.
    → She has to eat less and exercise.
    3. She goes to jog at six o'clock every morning.
    → She goes jogging at six o'clock every morning.
    4. She also keeps away the junk food,eat more fruit and vegetables.
    → She also keeps away from the junk food and eats more fruit and vegetables.
    5. She wants to lose weights because she would like to be more charming,slender,and energetic.
    → She wants to lose weight....
    6. She is very happy that she decided to lose weights.
    → She is very happy that she has succcessfully lost weight.

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